See with my Words Part I – The Road to 2012

This is what I saw – my first impressions of a few of the magnificent portraits that form a fraction  of the ‘Changing Pace’ exhibition on the Road to 2012 at the National Portrait Gallery

See With My Words – Part I

Andrew Triggs Hodge and Pete Reed
Choppy clouds, tones of grey
sky-pattern whispering of wind;
water, popples, bubbles, eddies,
dance of white-edged wavelets;
green-gold reeds arching, feathered heads
bowing, windswept supplicants;
oars, suspended over watery curls
oarsmen, still, listening, planning, seeing
victory.

Eleanor Simmonds
Arch of swimmer’s body,
curved with grace , curled strength,
balance, toe-perfect, pitching
forward, forward,
bunched, ready
to push, reach, dive, surface,
power-stroke till fingertips stretch,
touch chill, tile finish.

Phillips Idowu
Silver, tine-design, sand.
Coach, rake-supported expectation.
Man, centred, perfect, plumb,
sergeant straight –
impossibly high,
shoe-laces flying, tiny flags.

Chris Holmes
Tilted head, arms outstretched,
cruciform
body at one with the water.
Listening to slip slap secrets
from liquid depths.
At peace.

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The Road to Twenty Twelve

The Road to Twenty Twelve.

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The Road to Twenty Twelve

I was privileged to be part of the private tour of the Road to 2012 photographic exhibition at The National Portrait Gallery yesterday.

It is a long time since I have taken an evening train to London to visit a Gallery, or anything else for that matter, on my own. As usual I hadn’t ‘researched’ the journey as many of my much better organised friends (and family) had recommended. ‘There are always trains to London’ is my belief. I chose the station with the most convenient parking , turned up half an hour later than I planned and, having negotiated the automatic ticket machine ( my problem with these machines is always which slot takes in money and which slots fires out tickets), stepped within minutes onto a Waterloo-bound train.

I reached Waterloo 20 minutes before I was due at the gallery to meet Stacey Bowles, the BT Storyteller rep, but nothing could burst my bubble of confidence. There was no queue for a taxi and I confided in the driver that I had to arrive by 6pm. Now, you wouldn’t think that the roads would be clear at 5.30pm, and they weren’t, but my trusty driver deposited me at the doors to the Gallery with minutes to spare. This was surely going to be a charmed evening.

My first surprise was no fee to enter, my second the buzz of activity in the Late Shift Bar. Jazz playing in the background, people doing what people do all around, no queue to deposit my coat and bag (I hate handbags). It was a treat just to be here. I could have sat in this space all evening and just soaked up the vibrance, and watched – for that is what writers do of course, they watch.

Before too long I noticed the clip board bearing Stacey and introduced myself. I took quiet stock of my fellow storytellers and was pleased to note that they seemed much like me…for some reason I had expected to feel staid by comparison.

My approach to the exhibition, the one thing I had planned in advance, was to research nothing about it beforehand. I wanted to see it for the first time that evening and just note the words that tumbled into my head at each exhibit. For that I apologise to my fellow storytellers, and indeed to our guide and curator of the exhibition, Ann Braybon, for I was the one scribbling madly into a notebook, leaving little time for networking, or even eye contact.

Believe me, I was listening to the brilliant insights Ann gave to the approach that she had found in her years of planning – it began as long ago as 2006 and needed to conform to the National Portrait Gallery’s remit of portraying people who have made a significant contribution to British life. Ann explained the birth of the idea of a timeline from beginning to end of the Olympic journey – and the way that translated into the exhibition; to the methods and ways of working of the two different photographers; to the difficulties of access to the sitters; the ways in which elements of the sport could be captured when working with athletes and coaches; the need to capture environment and character, background, hopes and aspirations.

Emma Hardy is the chosen photographer to portray the movers and shakers behind the scenes – facilitators, organisers, planners, experts. Her method is to meet the sitters beforehand, know them, build their trust, and then to capture part of their essence on film – yes, film. As these people are planners, thinkers, ideas people, often office based, the decision to capture them away from their working environment worked especially well. Emma, using ambient light only, working alone, brilliantly shows a reflective, more intimate side to subjects such as Stella McCartney (Adidas Creative Director, among her more well known personae), Michael Morpurgo  (prestigious poet, working on scripts for branding material), Chris Allison, 27 years a uniformed policeman, now Assistant Commissioner in charge for Olympic Security, Seb Coe, pictured in a tracksuit at the top of a rise that you just know he has taken at a run, looking barely out of breath, fit, controlled and, well, natural – just some of the amazing studies on show.

Finlay Mackay is the photographer chosen to depict the athletes – not in their competition arenas, but more naturally, just ‘doing their thing’. Finlay works in an entirely different way. He uses additional lighting, assistants and utilises digital skills, such as photo-montage to show his subjects and their worlds. Miraculously he has captured worlds as well as people. The Birmingham gym where boxer Khalid Yafai has trained since boyhood under coach Frank O Sullivan. There are other young boxers in the background, maybe some lucky enough to be mentored by Khalid. There are pencil sketches displayed high on a wall of boxers from the gym, drawn by one of the female coaches. Mackay portrays the importance of family in exhibits such as those of Taikwondo champion Aaron Cooke, photographed outside his home with parents and siblings, where his father had built a training area for his son; in the calm face of Mandip Sehmi’s mother, her tranquil, clasped hands as she watches her son, determination transfiguring his face, as he protects the ball from opponent Andy Barrow in  a Wheelchair Rugby (previously known as Murder Ball – not a misnomer!) tackle.

Magically, these photographers offer insights into worlds we can barely imagine – the determination of athletes, the concerns of organisers, the impact of environment, the challenges, inner thoughts of those who will make London 2012 an integrated, moving, spectacular tribute to the Olympic ideal that pervades all of life, not just sporting endeavour.

Moved, full of impressions, words, phrases and emotion, I made my way home in a bubble of inspiration. A free taxi was just waiting at a red light for me to step into, the train was at rest at the platform with only minutes to wait before I was on my way home.

It had truly been a charmed and magical evening. I now have poems in the making which will be posted here and at http://www.btlondon2012.co.uk/storytellers/WhatsNew-Pages/WhatsNew.php.

If anyone reading this has a chance – take yourself to The National Portrait Gallery, it is well worth the trip.

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BT Storyteller Competition

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The 1oo BT Olympic Storytellers were invited to submit a piece entitled ‘Anticipation. The entries were judged by Caitlin Moran. I’m proud to say my poem was judged as winner!
Many others’ work was commended and included prose, photos and sculpture.
I can recommend a visit to the website at http://www.btlondon2012.co.uk/storytellers/index.php
It is well worth it…don’t forget to vote for your favourite piece by clicking ‘like’! The more votes storytellers get, the more ‘points’ they earn…I have my fingers crossed to come near the top of the list.

My poem, below, was designed to embrace olympic hopefuls from all over the globe, through a wide spectrum of sports as well as the myriad other people with a great investment in the success of the games in London 2012.

Anticipation

From misted dawn, cold, unforgiving
slap of trainers on damp tarmac.
Training. Again. Always.

Through desert haze, dusty, choking,
crunch of foot in sand.
Again. Training. Always.

In chill, grey, open water, churning
splash of ankle-kick in waves.
Always. Training. Again.

From sweat–stinking late night gym,
clack of weights lowered, controlled.
Training. Again. Always.

Along thin aired, cloudy mountain trail,
whir of wheels, locked into descent.
Training. Always. Again.

Horses whicker, stabled, waiting; yachts
chatter at anchor; pistols, cold, boxed,
safety on; bows unbent, relaxed;

Racquets, balls, parallel bars; stilled rings, chalk
for sticky hands; crash mats; dhojo; boots – all
still, empty, at rest – for now.

Mayor and minister, coach and trainer;
groom and ref and umpire. Taxi driver;
train driver; bus driver; landscaper scattering

seed for field of gold – all waiting, wondering
watching progress as brick on brick, window
by window, stair by stair, the dream is made real.

Pools filled, surfaces laid, lines marked, walkways
paved. Village built, rails joined, velodrome
stands bright and proud. Routes tested, details

fine tuned. Competitors dream, coaches scheme
politicians rub sweaty palmed hands. Will it work,
can it work, how good will it be…

… and the clock in the
square counts down, down
and down to London – 2012.

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Dverse poetry pub – critiquing

I am so sorry not to have your sessions to look forward to Luke. I have enjoyed them immensely.

Here is a poem that needs work.Please pull it apart so I can put it back together and make it stronger and more meaningful. It is about an old soldier who lives in Wootton Bassett, honoured every repatriation by collecting all the tributes that remain on the war memorial and binding them into a book of remembrance.

I can’t seem to end it  in a meaningful way.

Still Doing his Bit

Every card, plastic flower
rain-soaked soft toy,
he collects with aching fingers
broken heart .
This old soldier
marching now on battery power
fills the shopping basket
on his red, mobility scooter,
lurches, wide circle, for home,
turning his back on the bare
Wootton War memorial.

He straightens painful creases
wipes, dabs, winds scarlet ribbon, gathers
petals, photos, paper poppies,
dries each heartfelt gift, preserving
strangers’ tributes
to another fallen soldier. Bags,
tags and glues every token
into unwieldy, weighty volume,
heavy archive boxes. No message lost,
no tear missed, no prayer unheard.

Wearily he sinks into body-moulded armchair,
Knobbled fingers brush painful rhythm
on worn twill trousers, slippered feet
beat impatient tattoo. More lives wasted;
no lessons learned; no end in sight.
Comforted that his time is numbered
in months, not decades, he falls to
remembering a different war, his war,
a war to end all wars. The long
night passes.

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Stanza – Camberley

The new Stanza group is up and running – the first meeting will be on Wed 7th October at 7.30pm. Anyone interested should contact me via this blog for further details.

There are seven members rom the previous Woking group and some new poets joining in.

If you are a poet in the GU8 to 25 postcode, KT 12 – 16 postcode, or TW 16 – 20 postcode, we are the nearest Poetry Society Stanza group to you and would welcome you warmly into the group.

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Stanza Poetry Group – Camberley area

I have just discovered that the local Stanza Poetry Group has folded because the organiser has moved out of the area. This is a great shame as the benefits of poets meeting and discussing their poetry are immense. To do this with the backing of the Poetry Society, with an inside track to events, current publishing trends and competitions makes it even more beneficial.

I am a long standing member of the Poetry Society, have read my poetry in the Poetry Cafe, and been on the receiving end of the support of a local Stanza group, so I would like to fill the gap left by our group’s demise.

I live and write in the Woking /Camberley area and have a room where we can meet free of charge, regularly and in comfort and so have applied to the Society to resurrect the group.

Anyone interested in poetry, the writing of it or the appreciation of it and would like to join the group, please contact me through this blog and I will bring you up to date with progress.

I am braced to be inundated with replies…

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There is a new movement afoot and it is Paragram!

As far as I know there are no regular ‘reading ‘ events for poetry and prose in our area – Guildford, Woking, Camberley – so a group of us have decided to test the market.

We have formed a group called Paragram and are currently working out the details of our first event, hopefully to be held on an early November evening in The Chertsey Bookshop, Guildford Street, Chertsey.

We are planning readings of poems and excerpts from longer prose pieces in the comfortable setting, to the aroma of freshly brewed coffee and newly baked muffins…and more! There will be a small entrance charge to cover the cost of the venue – they are opening in the evening especially for us – and the event will coincide with the publication of the group’s anthology called, appropriately, A Toe in the Water.

There must be many writers of poetry and short fiction lurking out there in the area just waiting for the opportunity to meet up with like minded people, to share ideas, critiques (gentle!), gossip, improve, laugh (a lot) and to bring their writing to a larger audience. There is nothing like a little warmth and light to help writing to grow.

We plan to invite other established and new writers to read at future events, as well as to garner members for our (currently) small group. Also we would like to encourage open mic opportunities for writers to test the audience for their work, or just generally give their words an airing before wrapping them up carefully and returning them to the drawer, the shoebox, or whatever corner they usually hide in.

If this is something YOU may be interested in, contact me through this blog, or log on to the group’s own blog – www. Para-gram.com  to learn a little more about us.

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Wootton Bassett under a louring sky

‘By honouring one, I honour them all’

This was my feeling as I approached Wootton Bassett to pay my respects to Lt Daniel Clack, the latest tragic death of a young, so very young soldier on patrol in Afghanistan.

The journey, not a difficult one was made perilous by driving rain with attendant standing water and spray. Several times turning round seemed to be the sensible option, but stubborness drove us on. How could rain turn us back when travelling to honour a soldier’s return from a war zone? Compared to the ordeals faced by our troops, bad weather is trivial.

Wootton Bassett has an air of the everyday, and it is this as much as anything that marks the glory of what they do. Amid the day to day tasks of their lives, the town’s people take time to mark each repatriation with a quiet dignity and tremendous respect.

Uncannily the rain stopped as we waited, though the sky remained lowered by cloud as if in recognition of the distress of the mourners. The wait was long and many of those waiting were elderly, old soldiers numbered many among the crowd. No-one grumbled. The conversations were friendly as stranger made connection with stranger, united by the need to show gratitude. In the wake of the riots on other towns, it was difficult not to make comparisons between the young people who peppered this High Street with the hooded thugs who had terrorised streets elsewhere. Solving the dilemma of why some give so generously while others take so viciously was for another day, another occasion.

Many times I have read about the patience of the growing crowd that lines the High Street, the solemn tolling bell, the quality of silence that falls as the cortège approaches, the dignity with which the crowd melts away as the hearse with its precious burden eventually passes on its way. I have no words to add except that, even though I was expecting it, the experience took my breath away.

Sadly the need for repatriation ceremonies has not passed, will not pass in the foreseeable future, but Wootton Bassett has come to the end of its time at their heart. Whether the arrangements for the memorial garden under construction beside the route from Brize Norton will fill the gap remains to be seen.

I came to Wootton Bassett for many reasons, some simple, others complicated. I came looking for something that I did not find. I suspect what I am looking for lurks within me. I found something I did not expect, but most of all I was glad to have been there to whisper my own prayer for that young man, for all the members of the armed forces and their families – those who are grieving and those, like me, who are fearful and proud in the very same moment.

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First Olympic Storyteller outing…London/Surrey roadrace to test Olympic route

Waiting

Buzzing with the expectation that ripples through the crowd at the right angle corner in Byfleet, I search for the ‘multiple picture’ setting on my new, birthday present camera. The guy next to me, sporting a similar model but different manufacturer fiddles for a bit but can’t help.

“Should have sorted that earlier,” mutters the other half. Well, I know that, but won’t admit he is right. A commissar’s car sweeps through telling us that there is a four man break away four minutes ahead of the main field.

Still I search. Scattered applause follows and I know the cyclists are close. Then, success, I manage to set the mode I need and clamp the viewfinder to my eye. Focus. Set. The clapping surges towards me and then four men, pumping hard, sweep around the corner and accelerate through my rapidly clicking viewfinder.

Here they come

there they go...

All goes quiet as we count off the four minutes. Still not overly confident, I don’t lower my camera but amuse myself adjusting the focus to various points, trying to second guess the best place to have absolute clarity. I daren’t try to view the shots I have just taken. What are the chances, I wonder, that I will catch anyone clearly enough to recognize, let alone Mark Cavendish…and how would I recognize him through the tiny viewfinder anyway…believe me it is not the best way to watch a cycling road race, which is an event of split seconds at the best of times with two eyes and a head that is allowed to swivel. Once again the wave of applause signals that the Peloton is near. As the police motorcycles speed around the corner I begin to click.

the peloton arriving

...and there are more...

the tail-enders

I don’t stop until the RAC motorbike repair van has brought up the tail end of the procession.

Dedicated AA repair van to help motorcycle outriders should they break down.

Reluctant to move on, people in the crowd by the barriers smile at each other, then turn slowly to make their way home. The number of cyclists is amazing, many sporting clever towing attachments for small children.

As we stroll away I tune into voices around as they discuss cunning plans so that next year they will be able to sprint off to catch another view of the race further along the route.

At home I connect camera to computer and begin to download 146 shots –taken in 6 short seconds.

that flash of green

I scrutinize them then a flash of green catches my attention – in GB strip or not, there is no way Cav would be riding without his green helmet, shades and flashes on his bike ( he won the prestigious Tour de France Green Jersey 2011) – and there he is. Focussed, safely placed near the front of the pack, intent on doing what he does best – win!      

Eyes on the prize

       

Red, white,blue and green-
pumping muscles, strong heart, Cav’s
eyes fixed on the prize!

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