Cityscape

Cityscape ( istock photo)

Feeling jaded today and this poem reflects my mood. I have posted it on One Shot Wednesday – thank goodness One Stop Poetry keeps me grinding along.

Cityscape
Architectural hubris,
Thrusting concrete and glass
Dwarfing the merely human to
Wander at their feet, buffeted by
Skyscraper generated gales .
Constant shadow stalks ground level,
Cast by blind-eyed walls.
Streets where ambition walks
And greed prevails.
Dry mouths stretch in
Endless howl for
Lost souls.

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Another poem, inspired by a Rosa Frei photo

A brilliant Rosa Frei photo

In this sand I see  the world,
pattern too large to comprehend,
too small to understand, each grain
unwittingly playing its part.

In this sand I see the world,
spilt blood absorbed, often unremarked,
storms whipped up to cloud the truth,
wealth hoarded, guarded, hidden.

In this sand I see the world,
great beauty taken for granted
symmetry, calm depths, fine peaks, ignored
– conflict preferred to detail shared.

In this sand I see the world
confused yet conforming,
slipping into well worn tracks
unable to scale the slip-slide slope.

In this sand I see the world
breathtaking, mysterious, enigmatic
and flawed.

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Onward…to One Shoot Sunday

Sadly, I did not get any further than the shortlist for the Fish Poetry Prize, but that in itself was a great result out of 1300 submissions, so I don’t feel too despondent.

Luckily it is Sunday and as usual One Stop Poetry has a brilliant article about their featured photographer, Rosa Frei. The images on the post are amazing and each could inspire a poem, and probably will throughout the week.

For today I am linking this one –

Thanks to Rosa Frei for this strong image

Take my hospitality for granted.
I’ll prepare a feast for you –
To honour you as guest ….

I have removed this poem to edit and rework it and hopefully find another use for it!…

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Revision of The Doe

Doe (istock photo)

Following some really helpful comments on this poem when I posted it for One Shot Wednesday, I have slightly revised it. I would love to hear whether I have improved it, made it worse or just not made any discernible difference at all!

The Doe

No horizon,
Low clouds meld
With stricken meadow,
Silver birch, tarnished streaks
In blasted landscape. Field levelled
By frost –  thick as snow.

Single tracks criss-cross
Into tangled thicket. Bramble coils –
Threaded, razored blockade beneath
Willow whips, birch withies
Flex in windswept time with
Blasted, beech.
Follow that single track upwind.
Stand sentinel by thorny barricade.

Look.

Wad of desiccated leaves,
Fawn and lifeless – trace it with your eye.
Move just your eye. Follow
Gentle curve to cream oval tuft –
back again. Look beyond
Skeins of khaki stalks.
Sketch dark, damp stone.
See it twitch? Be still, be silent –

She knows you’re here.

Watch her ears,
Furred sienna trumpets, raise,
Twist to trap the scratch
Of your breath. You will
Not keep her. Be ready. The doe will
Rise and run in one smooth
Fluid move, breach the bramble barrier,
Duck under scrabbling branches,
Leap and zig and bound
And zag and rise over
Hedge, ditch, fence – alluring,
Graceful,   then

Stop.

With single bark, hoarse echoing warning,
She’ll blend her winter, biscuit- beige body
Tidily,     quietly       with

Frozen,

Fallow

Field.

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One Shot Wednesday

The Doe (istock photo)

This is a work in progress and I would appreciate any comments that will help me knock it in to shape so I am posting it for One-Shot Wednesday.

No horizon,
Low clouds meld
With stricken meadow,
Distant silver birch, tarnished streaks
In blasted landscape. Field levelled
By frost –  thick as snow.
Single tracks criss cross
Into tangled thicket. Bramble coils,
Threaded, razored blockade beneath
Willow whips. Birch withies
Flex in windswept time with
Blasted, beech branches.

Follow that single track upwind.
Stand sentinel by thorny barricade.
Look.
That wad of desiccated leaves,
Fawn and lifeless – trace it with your eye.
Move just your eye. Follow
The gentle curve to cream oval tuft – and
Back again. Look beyond
The skein of khaki stalks.
Sketch dark, damp glistening stone.
See it twitch?         Be still, be silent.
She knows you’re here.

Watch her ears,
Furred sienna trumpets, raise
And twist to trap the scratch
Of your breath. You will
Not keep her. Be ready  –  the doe will
Rise and run in one smooth,
Fluid move, breach the bramble barrier,
Duck under scrabbling branches,
Leap and zig and bound
And zag and rise over
Hedge, ditch, fence – alluring,
Graceful and then – stop.

With single bark, hoarse echoing warning,
She’ll blend her winter, biscuit- beige body
Tidily, quietly with
The frozen,
Fallow
Fields.

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Holding my breath!

I am flabbergasted – one of my poems has now reached the short list for the Fish Poetry prize. This is startling news and I have to keep pinching myself. Just to reach the last 20 something poems out of thirteen hundred seems too good to be true.

And yet, I still have not fully mastered basic tools such as trochaic feet…though I think I now have the measure of iambs. My difficulty seems to be that when I read something out loud, I manage to subtly manipulate what I have written to make it fit.

I tried the One Stop Poetry prosody exercise set by Gay Cannon this week and managed a halfway satisfactory first draft (see my post ‘Minor Key’) , but could I tell if I had utilised trochees…could I heck!

Gay very kindly pointed out where I had and where I hadn’t and kindly said that what I had written worked because of the subject matter.  I thank her for her generosity, however, I know that I still can’t reliably count this skill as one of my poetic tools…yet. And so I accept that I have much to  work on.

Thanks to the One Stop Poetry site for continually stretching my expertise and for coming up with such challenging and inspiring prompts and exercises.

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Minor key

Today’s thoughts
arrive in minor key –
laments, quiet songs,
a prayer.
Clogged by
atmosphere
Sultry thunder
beats my ears.
I’m stalked by
nameless fear.
Oppressive air
heavy, still –
asthmatic breath
asphyxiates.
Pollen hang glides
mini-thermals,
tightening lungs
jam up.
Resignation,
inhalation –
Finally
I catch
reluctant breath.

This is a real mix I think – I am no longer sure what is trochee and what isn’t….help please!

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Tiny miracles

Sun strikes cobweb strands to shine like silk. Beautiful in their intricacy, I leave them where they are, ducking to avoid ruining them.

Dust sails on streams of light shining through the grimy window. Delighted, I watch the show for some moments.

Rich smell of earth and dried herb stems, compost and dead leaves, scent of rainwater freshly decanted from butt to pail, join to provide heady perfume.

Crumble of soil scattered across the old wooden table that serves as a potting bench. Scrunchy underfoot spillings and sweepings beneath my garden clogs.

Leaning towers of tiny pots, seemingly fidgeting in their eagerness to carry this year’s crop.

Gaudily illustrated packets of seed march alphabetically in an old sweet tin. Inside each little envelope scores of tiny miracles waiting, just waiting, sensing the time is right. Alyssum, antirrhynum, bellis, calendula, cleome, cosmos, dahlia, delphinium, larkspur, nasturtium, passion flower, poppy… these and many more, some tried and true, others experiments, little excitements to charm and delight through the summer.

I stand, sniff, savour. I am reminded of my father, my grandfather, uncles and maiden aunt Lily, married to her garden. In this moment of anticipation I am connected to growers everywhere, in shed, field, greenhouse, allotment, on balcony. A band of mucky fingered, season watching servants to nature’s annual wonder. My own stubby fingers itch to be active. I draw one last deep breath of the magic that is my potting shed, and begin.

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Good Friday

Sun filters
through scented lilac.
Good Friday,
warm and bright.
Maybe this is the year we
learn Easter’s message

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Fish and rusty trumpets

Just a quickie today but I just have to blow my own rusty trumpet a little.

One of my poems has been long listed for the Fish Poetry prize out of 1300 entries. This is amazing, and is as good as a win for me. What a surprise!

So much has happened since I gathered all my courage to read at the Poetry Cafe in Covent Garden. Agnes and Adrienne – I owe it all to you. Thank you.

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